Again, I am posting a colleague's email: this is from Jann. Very insightful. My comments will be below (and via email.)
Hey! Mark!
I forgot to mention that I'd read the Allan Pred article. I think it goes
well with May workshop Day 2.. especially since we will be walking around
the Boston Mills...imagining life as it was. I think the Pred article is a
good comparison between established Boston and life in Ohio.
I especially liked the idea of the merchant shopping for the food for the
day...oh, and all that attention to what he wore! I liked that, too.
I was taken by the idea of Harvard....did all the merchants go to Harvard?
and the need for connections. There's something appealing to me about the
feeling of responsibility to help someone get a foothold in your chosen
vocation.
I wanted to ask you about the presentation of the text on page 67. It looks
almost poem-like, and I wondered about the text on page
68....projects/paths. Why did Pred do that? Did I miss something? Can you
help me understand what is going on there?
You know, it might be an idea to give the participants the Pred article on
day 1 as preparation or background for Day 2...I think it feeds nicely into
that creative activity in the afternoon of Day 2. Is that what you were
thinking?
Jann